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[twhetzel]

Hello All,

It took some time but our first site is up and running. Please take a look at it and tell us what you think. We welcome any advice you can give.

Thanks,

TnT

www.tntservicesplus.com

[justageek]

Well, I must say...you guys have DEFINATELY come a long way!!!

[Salsproducts]

Hello Tod & Tiffany,

My first observation is the date in your sales letter. I would find a program or code that would make the date current each time your site is visited.

It looks as if you have a decent amount of affiliates to work with. However; I would not use all banners as they don't bring in a lot of conversions. I would recommend writing a review (using relevant keywords) of each affiliate and place a link to them within your text. The search engines love text...not so much banners.

Try to keep all your products on the same page as people may not always click on your About Us or Contact Us links.

On your home page you have a customer response...I would copy that to all your other pages.

Finally, I would change my email address to something like admin@tntservices.com or support@tntservices.com. It makes you look more professional than a Yahoo account.

Good Luck!

[hoss]

Hello

I've had my site up and running now could you take a look at it and let me know there's anything I need to change or add or take out or to just make it better.

Thanks,
Gary w
http://thewilsonenterprises.com

[Salsproducts]

Hello Gary,

The first thing I noticed was the title "TheWilsonEnterprises" on your header. Remeber, until you are known no one cares who you are (no offense). You have about 7 seconds to grab your viewer's attention and you don't want them to click off your page. I used the free keywords tool at wordtracker.com and did a search for "online shopping" and came up with other suggestions such as "online shopping mall" or "shopping online". These keywords should be used in your header, title (html source), and throughout your pages as they help index your site with the search engines.

Also, use your home page to grab your customer's attention. For example: Are You Tired Of Standing In Lines At The Mall? or Are You Wasting Gas Going From Mall To Mall? This type of information needs to be at the top of your page so your visitor will be compelled to read more. Move the information you currently have listed to your "About Us" page...it seems to be a better place.

We've heard on the webinars that people will not click on a link that screams "Products" (unless you're Target or Wallmart). Consider using the words "Shop", "Store" or "Mall".

Finally, I reviewd your source code and noticed that you have duplicatons in your meta keywords. Not that it's a big deal as the search engines do not place alot of value on meta keywords anymore. Anyway I hope these tips help.

Good luck Gary.